v1.1
Setbacks are fleeting
Dandelions disperse with
hope’s cool breath spoken
v1.2
Setbacks are fleeting
Dandelions dispersing
by breath cool with hope
v1.3
Setbacks are fleeting
Dandelions dispersing
by your breath’s strong hopes
v1.4
Setbacks are fleeting
Dandelions disperse with
Your breaths whispered hopes
Earliar versions of this piece below, in non Haiku form
1st version
Feeding a setback with the meal of self-doubt
Fosters a cactus where once it a dandelion
Begrudingly dispersed with the easy of whispered hopes
2nd version
Setback are like dandelions
They often appear complex
but are easily dispersed under the breath of your spoken words